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Me!
Contributed by
jennyjen
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Sunday, 9th September 2012 @ 10:10:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I lost myself in your words
My tears held in my hand
All my emotions left inside
The thought of you made me hide
Love left and neglected me
The ones who said they'll be there for me
Went and left me
All alone, on my own
Who's going to hold me?
Who's going to guide me?
Leave me crying at my door
Leave my feelings with my heart
Leave me to die
My worth isn't anymore
It's me, let me be.
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jennyjen
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2012-09-09 10:10:46]
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Re: Me!
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by ammar on
Monday, 10th September 2012 @ 02:46:03 PM AEST
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A fine piece of emotional poetry.
I wouldn't describe it as 'tragic' because you still have yourself; as long as there is life, you can always do something great with it, and thus get even with the ones who abandoned you.
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Re: Me!
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by igba on
Monday, 10th September 2012 @ 04:03:08 PM AEST
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| outstanding!!! really great....sooo loving it |
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