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The Spaceship Enchantment
Contributed by
percival86jack
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Friday, 7th September 2012 @ 08:19:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The sun is over ninety million miles away
While the moon shines nightly above
But the stars reside in your gentle eyes
Like tiny sparkling diamonds of love
On a space ship we call “Enchantment”
We set sail on placid seas of bliss
Wrapped in the arms of the goddess of love
Enraptured by the warmth of each kiss
Floating like a couple of heavenly bodies
On a collision course of emotions
Destined to be joined in celestial union
Filled with great love and devotion
There is no greater feeling than mutual love
Poets strive to capture it in rhyme
The ultimate emotion known to man
A feeling of pure joy so sublime
The sun is over ninety million miles away
While the moon shines nightly above
But the stars reside in your gentle eyes
My darling, my obsession, my love
©Jack Ellison 2012
Copyright ©
percival86jack
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2012-09-07 20:19:38]
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Re: The Spaceship Enchantment
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by emystar on
Saturday, 8th September 2012 @ 11:07:01 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Very interesting work of art.
Filled with passion
Blessings, smiles,
emy
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Re: The Spaceship Enchantment
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th September 2012 @ 12:56:23 AM AEST
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sweet, wonderful thoughts, wonderful title, lucky man
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Re: The Spaceship Enchantment
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th September 2012 @ 02:16:47 AM AEST
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"There is no greater feeling than mutual love".
And to that I say amen, no kidding and how true!!!
I definitely agree.
Truly a beautiful poem.
Thanks
Tim |
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