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abused
Contributed by
hardcoreputa
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Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 09:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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come here my dear,
and whisper in my ear,
how much you love me,
and how I'm so pretty.
give me a sweet kiss,
just to prove this bliss.
-but no-
want me, take me, rip my dress,
kiss me, fick me, its all a mess.
gag me, strip me, bruise me,
abuse and use- me.
take control and beat me down,
see an 8 year old cry and frown.
this isn't perfect this isn't great,
i didn't want this kind of date.
why did i lie, say i was 15?
is it my fault that your so mean?
broken and left alone,
no way back to my home,
get away, don't condone,
now i know i'm on my own,
i just let out 1 more moan,
into the abyss of the unknown.
Copyright ©
hardcoreputa
... [
2003-05-10 21:35:00]
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Re: abused
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by Cancer on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 10:14:26 PM AEST
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i'm not sure how to describe it. i thought this was incredible, but incredible is too weak of a word. the agony really comes through in this one. very gripping write. i look forward to reading more of your work.
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Re: abused
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by tease_whizz on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 05:28:37 AM AEST
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i really enjoyed this write - its dark and powerful but honest and simply written at the same time. you might like to read my poem 'dirty' or 'crave'.
i've read quite a lot of your poetry and i like your style, very mature and truthful. i wish you all the best and hope your 'nympho' days are over - all girls need to realise that sex doesn't equate to love. keep writing, Kate x |
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Re: abused
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by obsidian_angel on
Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 05:57:45 AM AEST
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| wow, powerful poem. god i think thats all i can say- but well done its great. |
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Re: abused
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by etherealgurl on
Sunday, 25th May 2003 @ 08:30:58 PM AEST
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| this one burned me...so f-ing good!! Like fire sex can warm and nurture or burn and kill....this write makes that so incredibly vivid |
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Re: abused
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by tinka_belle on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 02:18:50 AM AEST
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i understand
ive been there
done that
and keep doing it again
and again
and again
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Re: abused
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by hardcoreputa on
Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 03:39:24 AM AEST
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| im a little confused by your comment tinka_bell.... do you mean that you keep raping? or you keep putting yourself in the position to be raped or what... if it is the latter... i hope you will be able to understand that no matter what it is NEVER the rape victums fault... i am very sorry that you have been there... it is not a very good place to be... best of luck to you ~Apryl |
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