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FALL IN LOVE DIAGONALLY
Contributed by
plasticherry
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Sunday, 2nd September 2012 @ 01:57:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Our hearts aligned just like the stars
When I met you in the dark
The vibration of your heart caused a tremendous quake
Symmetric rhythm discoteca
Shallow pleasures just to pass the time
But just until love returns
Cosmetic flavors and eroded scents
I'm wondering
If you will ever notice me
I'm tired of writing about love
The words I scribble become real in another world
And yet,
I cannot feel anything.
Like a plastic doll.
Copyright ©
plasticherry
... [
2012-09-02 13:57:05]
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Re: FALL IN LOVE DIAGONALLY
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd September 2012 @ 12:13:51 AM AEST
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Your author's note almost sounds like an apology. If so, don't. Be creative because you are creative. You are creative! You've got an original talent, not just talent and you're not cliche.
Keep up the great work.
Oh and I like this poem too.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: FALL IN LOVE DIAGONALLY
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd September 2012 @ 12:03:23 PM AEST
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Keep doin' what you do.  |
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Re: FALL IN LOVE DIAGONALLY
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by workinprogress on
Monday, 3rd September 2012 @ 08:25:38 PM AEST
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| I love your style! Thanks for sharing your poem! |
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