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frown or smile
Contributed by
jennyjen
on
Wednesday, 29th August 2012 @ 06:00:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Frown or smile your life’s a long mile
Laughter is always a must
Crying is all just for the while
Happiness will come just trust.
Frown or smile your life’s a long mile
Go here go there who cares,
Rain or shine life’s on its own time
Pass or fail no one cares.
Frown or smile your life’s a long mile
Call on friends they’ll be there
Right or wrong life will go on
There’s always times to share
Frown or smile your life’s a long mile
It’s full of ups and downs
All it matters is it’s worth it
No one said life’s perfect.
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jennyjen
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2012-08-29 18:00:05]
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Re: frown or smile
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by FragileStrength on
Wednesday, 29th August 2012 @ 06:06:22 PM AEST
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| I loved how the last two lines played out. I have to say(and I sound like a nerd saying this)but I'm reading A Song of Ice and Fire series, which is game of thrones if you don't know, and I could see this fitting in there. Not necessarily by the words, but the melody of the poem. It had a lilt to it that was very pleasing to read. Besides that, I liked how you didn't just show the good of life when convincing that it's worth it. You showed that life is hard, but you get through it. I really enjoyed this. |
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Re: frown or smile
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by plasticherry on
Wednesday, 29th August 2012 @ 11:14:16 PM AEST
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| I love poems with a positive messages. It was fun to read :) |
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