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One Life, One Love
Contributed by
xanvier
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Thursday, 23rd August 2012 @ 08:04:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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One Life and One Love
in this world above
unto God's light of pure
that's all we need for sure
which, our hearts unites us all
where as, we can never fall
praise upon the merciful Lord
so the honor can be restored
for as HE gave its one love
most powerful than above
worship the almighty God
and yet, do not be so odd
for as HE gave it's one life
to struggle without a strife
through its wounded pain, it feels
in a single heartbeat , it heals
so that, the soul and the spirit can learn
the ways of the HEART of GOD can be earn
the symbol of a single dove
is to show, ONE LIFE and ONE LOVE
with an olive leaf on its beak
can reach the highest mountains peak
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xanvier
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2012-08-23 20:04:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: One Life, One Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by FragileStrength on
Wednesday, 29th August 2012 @ 06:49:34 PM AEST (User
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I liked the imagery in the last two lines. I could picture a dove holding an olive leaf, it was beautiful. I could almost imagine this being sung, I don't know if that was intentional, and I think it falls in the rhyme scheme. It made for a wonderful read. |
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