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Matrimonium
Contributed by
spud
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Thursday, 23rd August 2012 @ 10:00:52 AM in AEST
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From baby things and apron strings and early-learning places,
to abc's and 123's and adolescent phases;
behold the daughter, now the woman, and soon the bride-to-be,
the jewel in my existence and a lasting joy for me.
I will trim the perfumed roses, sprinkle stardust round your feet,
and weave a bridal arch festooned with golden marguerite.
I will deck the aisles with sapphire silk bouquets and silver streams,
then charm the moon to grant you all your wishes and your dreams.
Beyond your sacred affirmations, beyond 'I do, I do,'
step bold into this realm of care, and know its beauty too.
The world is moved by lovers - spins in awe at their romance;
it sees that words which once they spoke, now music to their dance.
Copyright ©
spud
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2012-08-23 10:00:52]
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Re: Matrimonium
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by Ochonochar on
Thursday, 23rd August 2012 @ 06:17:14 PM AEST
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| Really nice. It reminded me of my own daughters wedding. Hope the wedding goes well. |
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Re: Matrimonium
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by emystar on
Thursday, 23rd August 2012 @ 11:52:42 PM AEST
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Well dear friend,
I don't think any mother could have done this any better. What's not to luv? Awesome.
smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Matrimonium
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by northernlights on
Friday, 24th August 2012 @ 02:51:35 AM AEST
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| Hi Tommy, glad you changed the format,I am not surprised she asked you to write it, The jewel in my existence..... you have such a way with words and the heart to enrich any daughters special day, seemingly effortless and concluding with a warmth to renew anybodys faith in matters of the heart. |
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Re: Matrimonium
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by desire on
Friday, 24th August 2012 @ 07:20:27 PM AEST
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What a beautiful poem with such beautiful words
Kudos to you for having such an amazing way with words
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Re: Matrimonium
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th August 2012 @ 01:01:49 AM AEST
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Well, you certainly made it seem easy. This is absolutely incredible! Brilliant and beautiful I might add...oh, I just did.
Love the way you showed how fast they can grow up.
Excellent and now it's time to give a shout out to another master.
(((((((((( TOMMY ))))))))))
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Re: Matrimonium
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by Spike on
Monday, 3rd September 2012 @ 05:53:12 AM AEST
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you channelled your feminine side for this one, poet. A beautifully worded dedication.
S. |
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Re: Matrimonium
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by deusdeira on
Saturday, 22nd September 2012 @ 02:02:21 AM AEST
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| This poem was both eloquent and beautiful. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: Matrimonium
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by ValDohren on
Friday, 9th November 2012 @ 12:57:16 PM AEST
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Can't believe this was written by a man !! You are so romantic Tommy - it's absolutely beautiful. Very well done.
Val :-) |
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Re: Matrimonium
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th April 2014 @ 09:10:48 PM AEST
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| so beautiful! hugs n' love nessa |
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