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The Trainwreck
Contributed by
Froggy
on
Tuesday, 21st August 2012 @ 03:49:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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2 lives riddled with harmful memories.
Feeling empty and broke inside.
Wishing for something new.
2 lives on parallel track,
Running side by side,
and without a clue.
Eventually the tracks intersected.
Followed by a great collision,
A wreck of sensation, and unknown emotion
Feeling so out of control.
Once the smoke vanished, and the picture was clear,
There was a great reason, that wasn't so near.
That this happened without question
And though we are still yet unsure why
I'm willing to find out,
The reason we're here.
Copyright ©
Froggy
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2012-08-21 03:49:41]
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Re: The Trainwreck
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by desire on
Tuesday, 21st August 2012 @ 07:54:08 AM AEST
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As beautifully written as this is your title was misleading
But I must say I was drawn in to the suspensfull story
that deserves. Sequel now I wanna know what you two
were to each other. I love your style |
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Re: The Trainwreck
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by UNORTHODOX on
Tuesday, 21st August 2012 @ 08:05:18 AM AEST
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I truly enjoyed the suspense
everything happens for a reason
-as we all have reasons,we do things the way we do
Well written
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: The Trainwreck
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd August 2012 @ 03:42:09 AM AEST
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| Great poem! I enjoyed every word it! |
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Re: The Trainwreck
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by Ochonochar on
Thursday, 23rd August 2012 @ 04:20:44 AM AEST
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Thought your poem was great.
I often wonder how different my life would be if just one of the decisions I have made through my life was different.
Remember the movie - Sliding Doors |
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