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A Couple of beers
Contributed by
ravi
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Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Wanna make peace with your harshest peers?,
just invite them for a couple of beers,
and shed some light hearted crocodile tears,
the climate soon changes into boisterous cheers.
Now is the time to make yourself nice,
and to break that formidable wall of ice.
As the cold brown liquid begins it's wear and tear,
somehow,suddenly our minds get a lot more clear.
The bonds of ego soon get broken,
hidden thoughts flow to come in the open.
As the sarcastic jeers get thrown out of the race,
pending issues soon get resolved on the face.
The party gets noisy; Oh! What a sight !,
you have become a roaring delight.
You atlast tie those loose,hurting ends,
and in the process,find some new dear friends.
Copyright ©
ravi
... [
2003-05-10 17:35:00]
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Re: A Couple of beers
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 06:59:04 PM AEST
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LMAO.... not at all, Ravi.....not at all...
Cute write tho...
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Re: A Couple of beers
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by shelby on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 07:41:57 PM AEST
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Ravi. this is a good one. I do believe we were thinking on the same wave , too funny your beer and my rum and coke!! Great job!!
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Re: A Couple of beers
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by Ravi on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 10:52:43 PM AEST
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| Thanx Michelle for your comment. |
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