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The Wonder of Her Eyes
Contributed by
richard2
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Saturday, 18th August 2012 @ 10:00:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The Wonder of Her Eyes
I met her smile on the stairway
As she fell into my heart
A moment I held her,
a moment was all
She conquered me
She became my moments
She became my dance
If I should capture
that smile again
I would write
The wonder of her eyes
I would trace the essence
Of her loveliness in my words
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richard2
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2012-08-18 22:00:32]
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Re: The Wonder of Her Eyes
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by emystar on
Sunday, 19th August 2012 @ 12:09:40 PM AEST
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Beautiful, tender.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: The Wonder of Her Eyes
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by desire on
Sunday, 19th August 2012 @ 02:04:16 PM AEST
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What you have captured here is simply
Beautiful, it leaps off the page
What a lucky woman to be honored
In such a way |
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Re: The Wonder of Her Eyes
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by BagsFoSho on
Tuesday, 21st August 2012 @ 01:38:18 AM AEST
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Great piece! I like poems short and sweet and this hits perfectly.
Love at first sight exists... |
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Re: The Wonder of Her Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd August 2012 @ 03:47:21 AM AEST
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| Awesome poem! |
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Re: The Wonder of Her Eyes
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 4th June 2014 @ 12:48:40 AM AEST
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As she fell into my heart that is just the
sweetest line! this is beautiful!
hugs n' love nessa |
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