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Contributed by
gypsymaddness
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Friday, 17th August 2012 @ 05:28:14 PM in AEST
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The feel of your touch on me makes me feel as though I am being sucked in a black hole of your making.Sucked in to a world of pleasure and pain,Of jeolousy and yearning,And denied access to your locked heart.I swim my way through this black hole, trying to find my place.I flounder as though blind.I flail as though drunk.I twirl as though on a high.I tremble at your touch.I keep being sucked,Down and deep.I cannot see the end, or the ground; or anything really.All I see is you.Your eyes fall on mine;And you smile.I am thrown deeper into the hole.I am flailing with no purchase, I have no hand-hold.You smile widder and look away.I come to a stop on a bed of ice, unsure.It cracks.I stand in the middle of unsteady footing, and you look at me again.And smile.The ice crumbles apart yet again.And I go back into the black hole, yet again.
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Re: LOST
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by emystar on
Friday, 17th August 2012 @ 06:41:05 PM AEST
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You did a great job with this write.
IF EVERY ONE Admitted, to truth they'd say they have been there before .
Awesome.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: LOST
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by plasticherry on
Saturday, 18th August 2012 @ 02:41:58 AM AEST
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| this is really cool :) |
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Re: LOST
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 25th February 2014 @ 10:52:55 AM AEST
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yesss
when love hits
the sensation overwhelms you
good write.... |
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