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Crumbled Leaf
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Thursday, 16th August 2012 @ 10:27:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Crumbled brown fragments,
lively green once in its veins,
broke away from life
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2012-08-16 22:27:53]
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Re: Crumbled Leaf
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th August 2012 @ 04:32:00 PM AEST
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Again such expression with so few words...painfully sad expression I will add.
I so know the feeling
If this is a true story, I am so sorry you're feeling down.
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Re: Crumbled Leaf
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by gypsymaddness on
Friday, 17th August 2012 @ 06:04:52 PM AEST
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| Tells so much with so little. Hope you feel better, and wish you the best. |
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Re: Crumbled Leaf
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by ming on
Sunday, 19th August 2012 @ 02:32:11 PM AEST
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Haiku at it,s best. nature an emotions rolled into one.
ming |
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Re: Crumbled Leaf
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 6th December 2014 @ 08:25:57 PM AEST
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| very done. reminds me of a crisp fall day. Great imagery captured here |
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