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Sleepwalking
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Thursday, 16th August 2012 @ 07:06:04 PM in AEST
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In a field
Far away from my home
There is a flower that I have never seen
I cannot imagine this flower
How the sun might perch at the folds of its petals
How its color might spring from a full moonlight
A trickle through the glass
The dawn light opening
My eyes lower with sleep
A dream
Falling
A harsh awakening
Shards of glass below me
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iodinelove
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2012-08-16 19:06:04]
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Re: Sleepwalking
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 17th August 2012 @ 01:54:59 PM AEST
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Well Abraham, we all have harsh awakenings to a harsh reality. Best thing is to accept it and make the best of it. It happens that it is a hidden treasure inspite of what it seems.
Liked the sobriety of the poem.
Cheers!
and blessings
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Re: Sleepwalking
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by emystar on
Friday, 17th August 2012 @ 06:26:06 PM AEST
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Great writing for someone that plays all time.
Huggs, luv, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Sleepwalking
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by ming on
Sunday, 19th August 2012 @ 02:35:59 PM AEST
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Sounds to me like you did imagine the flower... :) nice writing, kept me thinking of flowers & dreams.
ming |
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Re: Sleepwalking
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by percival86jack on
Sunday, 9th September 2012 @ 07:51:50 AM AEST
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A very interesting write... I enjoyed it!
Cheers, Jack |
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