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My Own Worst Enemy
Contributed by
crimsontears
on
Wednesday, 15th August 2012 @ 10:07:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Blue eyes are piercing
On a bloodshot backdrop
Blackened tears fall
Refusing to stop
Begging for the blood
To release the pain
Breathing seems impossible
When the ache remains
Loneliness is debilitating
Just emptiness inside
Self-loathing is consuming
Making it hard to hide
The mirror is always judging
Attacking imperfection
From mind, body, and soul
There’s nothing but rejection
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2012-08-15 22:07:17]
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Re: My Own Worst Enemy
(User Rating: 1 )
by richard2 on
Wednesday, 15th August 2012 @ 10:38:38 PM AEST
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a very dark and passionate poem,
well written and direct
Upon the subject.
I know the feeling very well
to be alone with no one but yourself
but I truly believe there is someone for everyone.
take heart
and
take care
Richard
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Re: My Own Worst Enemy
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by Stalkee on
Wednesday, 15th August 2012 @ 10:47:26 PM AEST
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I can very much relate to this, but I feel you've expressed it much better than I could have. This is a very honest and real poem with great expression.
Keep your head and I'll be trying to do the same. Keep up the writing, I enjoyed reading. |
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Re: My Own Worst Enemy
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by julesxo on
Wednesday, 15th August 2012 @ 11:05:34 PM AEST
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I can relate to this so much. This poem is beautifully written and the darkness and struggle is so evident. Keep up the amazing work!
-Jules |
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