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The coming storm
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Monday, 13th August 2012 @ 06:42:07 PM in AEST
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At the first battle
The sun stood among the stars
And spoke
Hold strong your bulwarks men
The ships will sail ever near
Hold firm your riggings
The sea will rise up to meet you
Take to mind your dreams men
Do not bid your loves goodbye
For it is they who will believe you
They that protect you
The fear of your death seeps into their dreams
The burden of that truth turned to your regard
Let us find the strength to overcome
This interminable sea
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iodinelove
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2012-08-13 18:42:07]
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Re: The coming storm
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by workinprogress on
Tuesday, 14th August 2012 @ 02:11:50 PM AEST
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| this brought me such great imagery. thanks so much for sharing it! |
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Re: The coming storm
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by LilDrifter on
Tuesday, 14th August 2012 @ 07:56:08 PM AEST
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Such a wonderful piece, great wording. I fully enjoyed reading it, Thanks for sharing.
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Re: The coming storm
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by ming on
Sunday, 19th August 2012 @ 02:41:17 PM AEST
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I dont know if you meant for this to happen, but I read between the lines; as the sea is life and mortality stalks while love holds at bay... :) Thanks for this.
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