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Black Roses
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Sunday, 12th August 2012 @ 04:29:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Morbid black petals
Decay the land from death's hand,
Mortality's bloom
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2012-08-12 16:29:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Black Roses
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stalkee on
Monday, 13th August 2012 @ 12:40:43 AM AEST (User
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I absolutely love haiku-style poems. I'm not good at writing them, but I love reading them. They are short, to the point, and can say so many things with so few words, and that is definitely what you have done here.
This is a great piece of writing to me. Keep it up. |
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Re: Black Roses
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th August 2012 @ 10:52:28 AM AEST (User
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Sad and powerful. WOW! |
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Re: Black Roses
(User Rating: 1 ) by ming on
Sunday, 19th August 2012 @ 03:45:09 PM AEST (User
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ah, this took me to a graveyard and I stand in awe of your abilities... ming |
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Re: Black Roses
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 12th May 2014 @ 10:45:12 PM AEST (User
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this is wicked beautiful! i really love it!
hugs n' love nessa |
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