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THIRSTY BANKS
Contributed by
aulakh
on
Sunday, 5th August 2012 @ 09:32:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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the water
find its way
towards destination
grind his own axe
what is religion of water ?
perhapes the religion of water is
satisfaction of thrust
the water does not need to know
religion of thirsty
and not intrust in nationality
water finish the thrust of birds
and beasts
the thrust of earth , crops
and humen
but it does not finish the
thrust of its banks
in which water flowing
why banks are thirsty by born
and die with their thrusts
Copyright ©
aulakh
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2012-08-05 21:32:44]
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Re: THIRSTY BANKS
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by iodinelove on
Monday, 6th August 2012 @ 08:15:25 AM AEST
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| While it seems like it's been through a translator, I still like it a lot. If it is indeed a translation, I am sure the original is beautiful. |
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Re: THIRSTY BANKS
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 7th August 2012 @ 10:16:05 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written with great insight and depth. |
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