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scary
Contributed by
crimson
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Saturday, 4th August 2012 @ 01:21:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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when my little sister falls to the ground,
and she starts to cry.
all that runs through my head is pipe it down.
i wonder why.
i dont cry at funerals,
when everyone else does.
my family thinks im tough for that,
but realy im just scuzz.
its not that i beat my emotions down,
quite the opposite.
but its like they just skiped town,
but to where, i dont know what.
my lack of emotion is scary,
so i try to pretend.
but that doesnt help me,
so i just wait for the end
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2012-08-04 13:21:25]
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Re: scary
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by dvtpdw on
Sunday, 5th August 2012 @ 09:43:34 PM AEST
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| So tormented. Your words show an inner soul that cries to find the way out. I liked your imagery and the path your words took. Great write. Thank you for sharing, P. |
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Re: scary
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 6th November 2012 @ 01:37:35 AM AEST
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Honest and nicely written verse. I think sometimes in life we hurt so much we need to turn some of it off, then at times it is lost to us...Does that make sense??
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Michelle |
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