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to build a house of love
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
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Tuesday, 31st July 2012 @ 09:14:34 PM in AEST
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it takes more than brains
or the stars from up above
if you are gonna build a house
& fill it full of love
start with the foundation
everything must be in tact
because a foundation built from love
should never have a crack
I know there will be stress
for life is built that way
I must find a way to stabilize
like words we want to say
petition walls must be built
to withstand what they endure
like the back bone of a family
it must be strong & pure
so with all of your measurements
& a strong will to survive
this simple house that love has built
is now very much alive
big or small & roomy
no matter what the size
with the right touch all will come alive
right before your eye's
the hot shot poet
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Re: to build a house of love
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 1st August 2012 @ 06:26:25 AM AEST
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This is beautiful.
Blessings,smiles,,
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Re: to build a house of love
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Wednesday, 1st August 2012 @ 04:42:39 PM AEST
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The message is oh so true! Love's foundation "should never have crack." If only the majority of relationships were set up like this,
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Re: to build a house of love
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by desire on
Wednesday, 1st August 2012 @ 11:26:15 PM AEST
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What a wonderful write
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Re: to build a house of love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd August 2012 @ 06:10:01 AM AEST
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| Brilliant! |
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Re: to build a house of love
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by NightMareShoGun on
Monday, 22nd October 2012 @ 11:04:54 PM AEST
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| really good |
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