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confused
Contributed by
anara
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Tuesday, 31st July 2012 @ 06:36:04 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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Flames are burning inside of me
You open your mouth
And I want to scream
Always a complaint
Never a thanks
Can't be myself
That gets on your nerves
Can't be happy
Need to be quiet and reserved
You say I need more friends
But tell me to stay home and clean
Our days are repetitive
You dug your own grave now you're dragging me down
I'll never get out
As long as you're around
Are you bipolar are you insane
Do you need me or hate me?
Please tell me
Do you love me? Or wish you never had me?
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anara
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Re: confused
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by Waynster on
Tuesday, 31st July 2012 @ 07:16:56 PM AEST
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This reminds me of my marriage! Only mixed around a little, would probably fit my situation quite well. I really feel for you1 You feel trapped and you will be trapped until you make that final decision to cut yourself loose! You need to be yourself and open up, don't allow someone else to lock you in! At first it will hurt, but eventually the pain will heal and your freedom will allow you to love again!
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Re: confused
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by thehotshotpoet on
Tuesday, 31st July 2012 @ 09:20:49 PM AEST
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OMG!!sounds like your talking about my wife,
only difference there is no doupt my wife is bipolar
thanks for sharing very good work
the hot shot poet |
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Re: confused
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by alicia on
Wednesday, 1st August 2012 @ 12:10:09 AM AEST
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| i really enjoyed reading your poem and i can relate to your situation, good job |
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Re: confused
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by bryantjunior on
Friday, 3rd August 2012 @ 07:22:42 AM AEST
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| very good, really made think of this from your own perspective |
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