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Constricted Lies
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Tuesday, 31st July 2012 @ 05:28:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Come beat upon the drums of war... and herald your defeat,
you sing a song of misery... and sneak up while i sleep,
I break your blackened olive branch... and throw it to the floor,
walk upon this ice you cracked... and watch my freedom soar,
watch the vines constrict your throat... into a silent state,
come lie down on the floor and bleed...accept your well earned fate.
Copyright ©
deusdeira
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2012-07-31 05:28:52]
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Re: Constricted Lies
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 31st July 2012 @ 04:19:37 PM AEST
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Very creative thinking.
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Re: Constricted Lies
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 3rd August 2012 @ 09:39:50 AM AEST
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I can certainly feel the raw anger in this.
Always safer to put it in words too, glad you did.
Nice work
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Re: Constricted Lies
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th August 2012 @ 01:14:00 AM AEST
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Wow, that is angry!!! Great way of expressing a feeling.
Thanks,
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