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Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
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Monday, 30th July 2012 @ 07:41:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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I look at life as carpentry
like the building of a shelf
we get caught in the design
& we forget about our self
the measurments are right
the looks are all in place
but something is still missing
in a single empty space
we go back & recalibrate
all that we have done
looking for a single flaw
but the appearance shows us none
although appearance means alot
it is not everything
it's the heart within the structure
& the happiness it brings
it also must be sturdy
built to take a load
like a heart with a destination
all alone out on the road
every peice has a certain place
& only there is where it fits
like words never spoken
to a heart that called it quits
the hot shot poet
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Re: appearance
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Monday, 30th July 2012 @ 08:42:33 PM AEST
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It looks like boredom has paved the way for a wonderful message! It is so true: society pushes for looks--th exterior. What should be promoted more often is the interior--the aspect that accentuates physical beauty. Well written this is and I hope to see many more like this,
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Re: appearance
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by emystar on
Monday, 30th July 2012 @ 11:54:37 PM AEST
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I probably said this before but I'll say it again, "You should stay bored 'cause this write is dynamite."
Good job.
Huggs, blessings,
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