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My Personal Heavenly Body
Contributed by
blueteelah
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Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You are my star
My personal heavenly body
You are my star
A celestial god is what you are
You smile outshines the Sun
Your love is brighter than Venus herself
I revolve around you like Jupiter's many moons
If you were Orion, I'd pray you would shoot your arrow into my heart
You guide me like the North Star
But I feel just like Pluto, so distant, so far
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Re: My Personal Heavenly Body
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 07:06:26 AM AEST
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| Boy, can I relate. Well done, Larry |
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Re: My Personal Heavenly Body
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 10:12:05 AM AEST
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| love your wording, and feelings here, great poem:) hugs nessa |
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Re: My Personal Heavenly Body
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by AngryPrincess on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 11:23:12 PM AEST
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you must LOVE astrology...that was beautiful... wow...
Lindsey |
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Re: My Personal Heavenly Body
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 12:24:20 PM AEST
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| I like this and can relate as well... good stuff |
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