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Walls
Contributed by
Blackheart
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Monday, 23rd July 2012 @ 08:39:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Barriers
Borders
Boundaries...
These 3 words you can associate with one thing
A Wall
Designed for doing 2 things - the one king b-word
Block from going out & block from coming in
But let's separate these four words into 2 groups
Barriers & Walls
Borders & Boundaries
Barriers & Walls
They can both be broken
Borders & Boundaries
They can both be crossed
Now those two specifically
They're quite under the term Lines
Now exclude the three b-words and let's get more precise
Walls & Lines
Lines are 2-D
Walls are 3-D lines
In other words walls are lines come to life without the 3-D glasses
And what do walls, let alone lines, do
They separate
And when something is separated, what do you get
Sides
And what do sides do
They differentiate 2 things
Which brings me to the very point of this poem...
What's being differentiated by this wall
And what does this wall symbolize?
There's a thin, fragile wall between my sanity & my desire for revenge
That thin, fragile wall is my exact amount of patience
It has countless cracks & chipped off parts
My conscience is the only reason this wall has yet to fall
And the 3-D wall becomes 2-D on the ground and be crossed
And I am forced to be as evil as the rest of this world
To be taken seriously...and be respected as well as I deserve
I dare y'all suckas to overcome this obstacle
And I guarantee...I GUARANTEE
That for your next obstacle...
YOU WILL SIMPLY...DIE...TRYING!!!!!
Copyright ©
Blackheart
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2012-07-23 08:39:21]
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Re: Walls
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by CommasCanSeperate on
Tuesday, 24th July 2012 @ 03:04:31 PM AEST
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| very dramatic and see through poem, harsh words used but it really all comes together beautifully , the 2D and 3D contrast is brilliant. |
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Re: Walls
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 20th July 2014 @ 06:43:54 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings and the imagery is excellent, brilliant actually,
hugs n' love nessa |
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