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Can you see through?

Contributed by LauranHyde on Monday, 23rd July 2012 @ 07:46:12 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

See that boy, the one that's cool.
He hides himself away deep from school.
Depression takes over he seems so strong.
The image of the kid, the kid who has it all.
Not all is what it seems, nothing is what you see.
Lie after lie he says that his just fine.
Not even his closest friends know why.

Day after day he lives with his pain.
Not one to share, always up for a dare.
All emotion is kept to himself.

Always there for when people are down.
There to listen, there to care.
He hides away, all the feeling and pain.
Let it go and sets it free.

Let it go, let it all flee, what he said turned to a simple plea.
A smile so bright it lights up the night.
Has he got it all. Does he seem perfect to you.
He'll hide it away, and make you believe, believe the things hidden deep inside away.
Written in words apon a empty page.
Words evolve his poetry so true.
Talent apon talent his one to succeed.
Hidden emotion trapped all but beneath.

Being Strong minded keeps him up high.
Keeping all emotion pushed back far away.
Not one to share, not one to tell.
Hidden behind a strong hidden wall.
Barriers don't break.

His held them up high. Others come before him self, not one to come in first, but always finish last.
See him smile, that golden smile. Happiness there, it pushes in through.
Strong, and caring a friend to all.
Listens and cares his a friend to all, keep him around or you may hit ground.

You think his strong, well I see through.
This boy is strong, but he wants to break.
All of what is hidden beneath the skin is filled with a dark anger and pain.
The loss of many people, with the sorrow of a young lost boy.
No one sees, yet no one believes.
When his gone there will be no relief.

Copyright © LauranHyde ... [ 2012-07-23 07:46:12]
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Re: Can you see through? (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Monday, 23rd July 2012 @ 09:29:15 PM AEST
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Makes me think of so many people I went to school with myself, it's a great write, I hope all well for you and that you keep writing

hope to read more soon
-Voice

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