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Honesty
Contributed by
Fluttermouse
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Monday, 23rd July 2012 @ 05:29:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You cut me deep with your words of truth,
You ruined my dreams with your honesty,
With seconds gone just standing still,
The world around me crumbles.
On the floor, desperate,
For a sign, a love, a touch,
I wanted you but you shut me out,
And now my world is empty
Copyright ©
Fluttermouse
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2012-07-23 05:29:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Honesty
(User Rating: 1 ) by CommasCanSeperate on
Tuesday, 24th July 2012 @ 03:05:43 PM AEST (User
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Simple yet very effective.
Straight to the point.
LJ X |
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Re: Honesty
(User Rating: 1 ) by LauranHyde on
Tuesday, 24th July 2012 @ 11:37:52 PM AEST (User
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this is great! short and simple but good. |
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