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Sands of Time
Contributed by
Fluttermouse
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Wednesday, 18th July 2012 @ 05:18:28 AM in AEST
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The sweet kiss of the sun,
A golden glimpse of temptation,
Rays reflecting your beauty,
A mirage across my mind.
Burning hot with desire,
Watching the sands of time,
Rushing over me like a wave,
Will you ever be mine.
The moonlit glow across the sea,
The tide moving in and out,
Sandcastles like memories washing away,
Fading like our romance.
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Fluttermouse
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2012-07-18 05:18:28]
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Re: Sands of Time
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th July 2012 @ 08:19:09 AM AEST
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You create an excellent atmosphere with this poem. It's quite vivid.
Cheers,
Mickey. |
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Re: Sands of Time
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by richard2 on
Wednesday, 18th July 2012 @ 09:37:21 AM AEST
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some great imagery and the poem
builds to an ending
good work
take care
Richard |
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