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Bleed It Out
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YPDC_Group_Writes
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Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
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"Exiled"
I'm trying to breathe,
But these memories keep overtaking me,
Cut the pain away,
Feel the blade deep inside,
I bleed it out for you,
Out for someone new.
Why cant you see,
How you torment me,
Take this bleeding rose,
And show me what will be,
"LadyFawn"
I'm told I will find someone new,
But these feelings for you I've accrued,
Make the darkness of night seem like morning,
And these thorns from this black rose alarming,
Bleeding out the worry and the pain,
For we shall never be one again,
From you now I must abstain,
As from this finger blood flows like rain,
My heart has a place that's empty,
For dear love is absentee,
"Rakerman"
As blood flows from my ravaged soul,
And mingles the the tears I shed,
Resulting in a hellish mix,
That fuels the torment in my head,
The bleeding that will never cease,
I have no hope to heal it seems,
I'm left with deep and bitter scars,
From jagged edges of shattered dreams,
"Exiled"
I'll do my time and I won't argue,
The broken glass a portrait of you,
I play on keys,
Barely in tune,
It's not me who I wanted to be,
I just need to,
I cash my life and lost my ID,
apathy is all I see,
Leave the numbers all behind me,
You are all I have inside me,
And all I can do is bleed.
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Re: Bleed It Out
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by shelby on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 03:15:50 AM AEST
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Bravo!! Great job on this piece of art!!
Michelle |
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Re: Bleed It Out
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by spooky on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 06:40:55 AM AEST
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| well written ,,well done,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: Bleed It Out
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by Lady_Bubbles420 on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 12:32:34 PM AEST
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| I loved this! It was really well written. You guys flowed very well together. I love writes about the dark side of human nature! |
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