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Endless
Contributed by
Fluttermouse
on
Sunday, 15th July 2012 @ 04:41:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Endless is the view of vast uncertainty,
Invisible in the white abyss,
Flakes of falling snow,
Wondering will this feeling of love grow.
Burning desire in the heat of the flames,
My heart cant take these twisted games,
Fear running through my veins,
Pure like the poisoned bite from a snake.
Copyright ©
Fluttermouse
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2012-07-15 04:41:33] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Endless
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th July 2012 @ 03:31:45 AM AEST (User
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A well-written and thought-provoking poem! I interpreted the poem as expressing the idea of the varied feelings which accompanies an endless and at times feared uncertainty. (And as always, my interpretation could happen to be nothing the poet intended...if that's the case... sorry). But anyway, I really like this poem no matter what. :) |
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