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3000 Miles
Contributed by
malinsinbigler
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Friday, 13th July 2012 @ 05:14:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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One blanket and a cold dark night
No one there to hold you tight
The covers strangle you as you try to escape
The lonely thoughts as you realize your fate
Far away, far apart
I知 here with a broken heart
3000 miles, and only 3 days away
I値l find my way back, I値l be there to stay
I値l find you there, on that bed
Swimming in blankets, full of dread
It won稚 last, not for long
It will fade away with the passing of dawn
3000 miles, 3 days away
I知 coming home, I知 there to stay
Copyright ﾂｩ
malinsinbigler
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2012-07-13 17:14:34]
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Re: 3000 Miles
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th July 2012 @ 09:25:09 PM AEST
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| Nice! Really enjoyed reading this! |
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Re: 3000 Miles
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by Waynster on
Sunday, 15th July 2012 @ 05:05:02 AM AEST
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i liked reading it! It has a lot of meaning to it, you should write more often. Keep it up!
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Re: 3000 Miles
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 29th July 2012 @ 06:05:14 PM AEST
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Well they do say absence makes the heart grow fonder.
The good thing about someone being away is the moment they walk back through that door :)
Steve |
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Re: 3000 Miles
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by velvet_rose94 on
Thursday, 25th October 2012 @ 01:16:10 PM AEST
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| Don't forget she was on the bed with your smelly gross hoodie. How come all your best work is when your fiancee is either far away or with you? |
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