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It still feels like home. . .
Contributed by
elle
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Thursday, 12th July 2012 @ 11:37:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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sweet summer
blooms in action
your cat
verses the camera
no creature should be that cute-
except in legend
or through some deadly spell. . .
you tell me it's your ex-girlfriend
come back to "speak no evil"
we laugh. . .
our laughter chases the sun
as it sets across the tracks
summer day
pre-made in some heavenly concoction
I sit. . . criss-cross, applesauce
my pencil
verses your camera
avenging a thousand words
reflexively. . .
like a spirit in the night
like a light cutting through darkness
. . . I taste a hint
of summer
on the last whisper
of your lips
salvation for a poet's soul. . .
(be the leaf)
commission green
double up on your spell of love
& I'll watch over you
like a secret keeper. . .
Copyright ©
elle
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2012-07-12 11:37:25]
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Re: It still feels like home. . .
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th July 2012 @ 01:09:28 PM AEST
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Re: It still feels like home. . .
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by emystar on
Thursday, 12th July 2012 @ 07:24:53 PM AEST
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Awesome writing.
blessings,
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Re: It still feels like home. . .
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by Spike on
Friday, 13th July 2012 @ 10:26:04 PM AEST
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nicely worded, elle. A heady fragrance of love and warmth on a canopy of words, like jasmine on the wind as Summer marks its turf.
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Re: It still feels like home. . .
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th July 2012 @ 02:16:32 PM AEST
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| Lurking in the shadows he, the Timotheus one, comes here often. I like it here, oh inspirational One. |
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Re: It still feels like home. . .
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by ming on
Wednesday, 22nd August 2012 @ 01:46:34 PM AEST
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Ahh. We heady seekers of love and ink...
'on the last whisper
of your lips
salvation for a poet's soul. . .
(be the leaf)
commission green
double up on your spell of love
& I'll watch over you
like a secret keeper'
I connect.
ming |
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