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The Relentless Internal
Contributed by
JDaw
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Tuesday, 10th July 2012 @ 06:21:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm homeless and heartless,
If home is where the heart is,
An artist, who's soul knows the hardest,
Doesn't show where the scar is,
Lost individual, habitual lyrical spiritual end,
In need of a miracle, hysterical friend,
Live and fight blindly,
Forget reason, timely,
Purple skies like my mind,
Scattered with clouds and soon stars will arrive,
I've lost my mind on past times,
Times spend idling the future, never mind,
Naked, forsaken exposed, dust and ashes but no rose,
No daisies either, not yet.
Copyright ©
JDaw
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2012-07-10 06:21:32]
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Re: The Relentless Internal
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th July 2012 @ 08:32:21 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful, emotional piece. It also has an excellent rhythm to it. Very nice write.
Cheers,
Mickey. |
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Re: The Relentless Internal
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Tuesday, 10th July 2012 @ 09:42:53 AM AEST
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Beautifully crafted emotional poem.
But
"I've lost my mind on past times,
Times spend idling the future, never mind,"
What a shame to losing the mind on past times and fritting and idling away precious time
"This is te day the Lord has made" Let us rejoyce and be glad!". Forget the past and go forward
Blssings! |
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Re: The Relentless Internal
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th July 2012 @ 02:36:19 AM AEST
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| Your poems are just great! Love it! Look forward to seeing more of your awesomely beautiful poetry. :) |
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Re: The Relentless Internal
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by InfinitePoet on
Thursday, 19th July 2012 @ 10:38:25 PM AEST
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Wow!!! This one made my evening!!! The Straight up realness to it is so awesome!!! This piece is the earmark of A Genuine,Fearless,artist,comfy with posting any kind of piece that happens to come out!! Loved It!!
Keep Writing &
Posting/Sharing,
Always....
Peace,
Brutal $oul
aka
Dana |
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