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Lost, Never Forgotten
Contributed by
JDaw
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Monday, 9th July 2012 @ 10:53:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Your beauty in the sun, glistening,
My heart reminiscing,
It broke down a fake fate now,
She was no longer listening.
Copyright ©
JDaw
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2012-07-09 10:53:11]
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Re: Lost, Never Forgotten
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by JOSEJAD on
Monday, 9th July 2012 @ 01:41:41 PM AEST
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| Wow its amazing how you can say so much in few lines. It is the works of a master. Keep on writing and post more bro |
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Re: Lost, Never Forgotten
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Monday, 9th July 2012 @ 10:37:20 PM AEST
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The foregoing commenter is so right. So very much said in so few choice words. That is a great achievement.! Kudos!
'Keep writing and posting and thanks for sharing
Elizabeth |
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Re: Lost, Never Forgotten
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th July 2012 @ 01:26:01 AM AEST
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| Beautiful! |
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