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Wandering, I see
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Saturday, 7th July 2012 @ 04:43:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Torchlight in the snow
A Silver circular divide
An aurora in the night
I wander in
A square, obsidian house
A body at the bottom of a pool
A golden awning hides the sun
I wander through
Beyond, the trees open
A white field in the snow
The beginning of distant mountains
I wander to
I walk slowly toward a valley
Sprinkled with the dead
A silver flower rising in their stead
I wander through
At the midpoint of the valley
The taste of salt in the air
The crash of an ancient sea
I wander to
The water is forever
A spire in the sun
A rise of laughter in the heather
I wander in
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iodinelove
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2012-07-07 04:43:57]
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Re: Wandering, I see
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th July 2012 @ 05:47:55 AM AEST
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Very beautifully written, quite haunting.
Cheers,
Mickey. |
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Re: Wandering, I see
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by JDaw on
Tuesday, 10th July 2012 @ 01:49:19 PM AEST
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Such amazing descriptive poetry. Only a few short paragraphs yet I felt like I went on an entire journey. Awesome :)
- JDaw |
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Re: Wandering, I see
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th July 2012 @ 07:08:40 PM AEST
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| Original and engaging. This is brilliant! |
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Re: Wandering, I see
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th July 2012 @ 12:24:57 AM AEST
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| Wow, is about all I got. |
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