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PAWPAW PREY
Contributed by
rilex4rhyme
on
Wednesday, 4th July 2012 @ 11:55:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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A vast green pawpaw
planted by wisdom endowned
nurtured peace without pieces
countless years back
all of sudden it brewed and erupted
blaring boo to the masses
flaring fool to the leaders
like a uproar thunder
let the pawpaw be the pawpaw
and stop the massacred menace
let the innocents be the innocent
stop tagging pawpaw a abysmal nickname
even though it is inevitable
stop cut-short pawpaw's seed life span.
Copyright ©
rilex4rhyme
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2012-07-04 23:55:34]
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Re: PAWPAW PREY
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by JDaw on
Monday, 9th July 2012 @ 01:04:37 PM AEST
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Interesting write, has a deeper layer to it that I like :)
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Re: PAWPAW PREY
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by JDaw on
Monday, 9th July 2012 @ 01:04:40 PM AEST
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Interesting write, has a deeper layer to it that I like :)
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Re: PAWPAW PREY
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by JDaw on
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Interesting write, has a deeper layer to it that I like :)
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Re: PAWPAW PREY
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by JDaw on
Monday, 9th July 2012 @ 01:04:41 PM AEST
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Interesting write, has a deeper layer to it that I like :)
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Re: PAWPAW PREY
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by JDaw on
Monday, 9th July 2012 @ 01:06:15 PM AEST
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| Sorry for all the comments, I'm on my phone and it messed up... |
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