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The Pain
Contributed by
BekachewSunderman1011
on
Wednesday, 4th July 2012 @ 02:42:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Our past is just a worthless memory,
all my scars are fading,
leaving nothing more than an insignificant mark.
But I still feel the pain of your harsh words and cruel laugh.
The pain of the blade slicing open my pale skin,
while crimson red blood poured out,
staining my life.
Day after day,
week after week,
I still feel the pain of your final words to me..
"I give up on you."
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2012-07-04 14:42:43] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by bigj on
Thursday, 5th July 2012 @ 04:05:34 AM AEST (User
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this poem has a wonderful expression to it. though it may be sad, they way you capture true pain with words is remarkable. thank you for writing this. |
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