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Discarded
Contributed by
Ensis718
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Monday, 2nd July 2012 @ 08:04:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She smelled like a mother to me.
She used to hug me so often
And I would hug back.
"Hug me tighter,
Don't let go."
She used to be my shield,
My protector
And precious caretaker.
"Help me,
I know I can count on you.'
But...
We lost that.
She betrayed me.
"How could you...?
He was my friend!"
My brother,
In his own way,
He helped her.
"How dare you...
How can you toss him away!
He was family!"
My father...
He didn't do much.
He wasn't there.
He made me worry more.
"You're saying he's...dead?
Would mom do that?"
"Why?
I can't tell you anything.
When I try to,
And I'm just about to cry,
I have to stop talking,
Because I know you'll only get angry
If I shed
One tear."
None of you cared.
None of you.
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Ensis718
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2012-07-02 20:04:11]
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Re: Discarded
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by TCK on
Monday, 2nd July 2012 @ 08:50:39 PM AEST
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| It's always hard when we lose something we care about. Sorry for the loss of your dog. :( God always cares. |
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Re: Discarded
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by emystar on
Monday, 2nd July 2012 @ 09:02:31 PM AEST
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So sad but written well.
I know how you feel. i lost two little dogs, toco belle dogs last week or so. Ithink they were poisened 'cause they died so close together and the rest of my dogs are fine.
Keep up the writing and I know how you feel.
Blessings, huggs,
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