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Heaven and Hell
Contributed by
waynster
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Monday, 2nd July 2012 @ 03:01:43 PM in AEST
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Straight up from hell
Satan will forcefully rise.
Only to meet the face of Jesus
coming down from the glorified skies.
Behind Jesus
galloping white horses ride.
Fighting Satan
and everyone that is holding his pride.
A fierce fight
a battle bigger than all past wars.
Fighting to send Satan back to hell
and all of his following boars.
Glory to the king
the leader of all.
If you follow and believe in him
never shall you fall.
Satan never gives up
and steadily tries to steal your souls.
Jesus has a daily job
in which the demons, to hell he daily throws.
Face to face
Jesus and Satan just do not see eye to eye.
Jesus is always truthful
all Satan can ever do is lie.
This life we have
allows us to make our own choice.
If you choose Jesus
forever you will rejoice.
This life we have
we will eventually hear a bell.
If the right choice is not made
then our soul will go to hell.
My choice is Jesus
he is the son of God.
There are many non believers
who will think my decision is odd.
Weigh your options
watch what goes on in this world.
When it is time for the rapture
into the heavens Christians will be hurled.
So, Satan
go back to where you belong.
Just listen to us Christians
as we always sing a very heavenly song.
Written by E. Wayne Searles on 2 July 2012
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waynster
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2012-07-02 15:01:43]
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Re: Heaven and Hell
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by emystar on
Monday, 2nd July 2012 @ 05:24:59 PM AEST
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Great writing and so true.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Heaven and Hell
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by TCK on
Monday, 2nd July 2012 @ 08:55:38 PM AEST
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| Well done. :) I found that a few of your word choices stole from the poem's impact, such as "od" and "hurled." I understand you had to use them to make things rhyme, but I felt something better could have been worked out. Overall, a great poem though. Great message. I'm also a beleiver, and it's true- a choice has to be made. Keep writing. :) |
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Re: Heaven and Hell
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by Action567 on
Tuesday, 3rd July 2012 @ 02:16:57 AM AEST
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Wonderful Poem and so very true. What a wonderful place we have to look forward to.
Good writing as always. |
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