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Far Andromeda
Contributed by
richard2
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Sunday, 1st July 2012 @ 09:21:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Far Andromeda
Her eyes sent drops of tenderness
Like embers on hot pavement, cascading
Into my heart, leaving tiny
Candles burning; building,
A flame of love within my soul
That will last though the earth dissolves
And graves leap into the sky,
A light from the paths of heaven,
A specter in the void
From the vanished earth
To be a wonder to visitors
From far Andromeda
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richard2
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2012-07-01 09:21:35]
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Re: Far Andromeda
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by TCK on
Monday, 2nd July 2012 @ 09:00:28 PM AEST
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| Nice! Great imagery and feeling, very origional descriptions. Well done and keep writing! |
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Re: Far Andromeda
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 8th May 2014 @ 05:57:53 PM AEST
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i love this, it is exquisite and
sooo beautiful!!
hugs n' love nessa |
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