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The Unbearable Darkness of Drunkenness
Contributed by
sebgreen
on
Wednesday, 27th June 2012 @ 01:51:10 PM in AEST
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How the words
Tumble
Dribble
Out of my incontrollable mouth
All the wrong words, in the wrong order
I tell you I despise you!
Love you - -
You are multiple and so is she
Standing by your side- -
Where?
Tomorrow, I shall regret
My lack of memories- -
Life is ephemeral, ethanol, fleeting
The grass is grassy green- -
And the blinding darkness
Of this tumbling night
Is weighing on my eyelids.
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sebgreen
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2012-06-27 13:51:10]
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Re: The Unbearable Darkness of Drunkenness
(User Rating: 1 )
by cherryamber on
Thursday, 28th June 2012 @ 06:04:28 AM AEST
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hey
i quitelliked this. it was succinct and i enjoyed the words you used in there; you got right to the point in a very truthful way! go and drink to that! |
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Re: The Unbearable Darkness of Drunkenness
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th June 2012 @ 11:28:15 AM AEST
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I'd like to say, I appreciate though have never experienced what your poem is saying, but it is all too recogniseable.
Concise, with a brimming glass of what is sometimes so disturbing about the mirror. Nice job. |
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