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Heal
Contributed by
SomethingClever
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Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 09:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I can't heal, and you know it's much too late,
and you know that I can't change
Time won't heal, the bruises that we made,
can you feel it start to fade
I feel weak, I hope you're scared and you can't eat, I hope you're crying in your sleep
Based on this fight, Hell is paradise, and the liar is often right
Amazed, you fake, we didn't love you anyways, you fake, live a lie to like to live
Amazed, you fake, we didn't love you anyways
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SomethingClever
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2003-05-09 21:25:00]
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Re: Heal
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by Apartment213 on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 10:34:00 PM AEST
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| hey....this was a really good write...sounds like u were ***** off...i like that! oh yeah i noticed how u mentioned "change" a lot...but hey i always pick fights in my stuff so its alright |
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Re: Heal
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by Metalmouth666 on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 12:39:18 AM AEST
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| you show him, nah jk this is a great write you did very well and I hope to read some other writes from you |
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Re: Heal
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by AngryPrincess on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 12:43:02 AM AEST
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very very good song yoseff, its really amazing...
Lindsey |
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Re: Heal
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by tease_whizz on
Sunday, 11th May 2003 @ 06:14:28 AM AEST
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| i really like this - strong lyrics, wish i could here it with the music. keep working on the rest of it, i'd like to read it when its finished. welcome to the site, i'm glad you decided to post some stuff. Kate x |
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Re: Heal
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by DOCTERKRISITN on
Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 02:58:44 PM AEST
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yoseff you are really good at what you do.
keep it up and i hope to hear more of your stuff soon
kristin |
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