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Wasting time
Contributed by
alex333
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Saturday, 23rd June 2012 @ 05:29:35 PM in AEST
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Asleep at the wheel of fortune, time rushes forward to eternity, the roadkill is me. Its Done, like some half starved beggar with a crumb. 3 years *****, 6 months kissing, and half my life gone to bed. Starring back and forth; the whiplash of regret and impotence. No chance, what life, Wisked by rushing winds of change, the momentum of the age. raging against the tide with water wings. Stand, fight, hope, love, exist... in a minute.
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Re: Wasting time
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd June 2012 @ 10:09:08 PM AEST
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Hi Alex333
I often put important things off or procrastinate, as most are prone to do quite literally on a daily basis, it more than, seems.
Even something you like, something you were suited to do, gets put aside --- sadly, sometimes just to watch something on TV.
I can't remember the last time I wrote a handwritten letter to someone I miss quite a lot. I used to get letters from people I love once in a while, and just a few words would mean so much.
We all grow old and that begrudging fact, speaks from your poem "Wasting Time", like there's literally, no tomorrow, or a euphemism putting it kindly suddenly seems like Crappolia.
Thanks --- for the memories. Like cobwebs, they maybe become hard to pull up. Personally - I see both the eyesight and the hearing, as well as the hair, equally going
about the same time. You'd think short-term memory loss wouldn't be so bad for someone who always did love to procrastinate. If you did, you'd be wrong.
Peace
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Re: Wasting time
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by AznDemon300 on
Saturday, 23rd June 2012 @ 10:49:13 PM AEST
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| Nice short and simple, but power poem. |
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Re: Wasting time
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by Pook on
Sunday, 24th June 2012 @ 04:22:06 AM AEST
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| very energetic and such a lovely read. want to see more of your poetry. |
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Re: Wasting time
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by Ensis718 on
Tuesday, 26th June 2012 @ 10:08:42 PM AEST
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| Oh my god, I have the same problem! |
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