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Hanging Low
Contributed by
lee6787
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Saturday, 23rd June 2012 @ 12:28:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Betrayed by my self
Over the thought of another’s help
Finding nothing in my emptiness
Holding no more chance at bliss
I fear I’ve lost you
And yet I never even had you
Oh this misery
That stands within dark reality
As I fall apart
I mend this broken heart
Broken by my fears
Eroded by my own tears
So now I stand alone
The master of another broken home
A child with no hope
Hanging at the end of a rope
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lee6787
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2012-06-23 00:28:52]
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Re: Hanging Low
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd June 2012 @ 12:39:54 AM AEST
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wow, I really like those last fine lines. Powerful and yes, dark.
Nicely done.
However, glad you found someone better.
Thanks,
Tim |
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Re: Hanging Low
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Saturday, 23rd June 2012 @ 07:46:43 AM AEST
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Masterly description of the state of utter dejection. Yes, and real dark.
Let us light it up with the candle of hope and trust.
Great job.
Blessings
Elizabeth |
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