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Picking Diamonds
Contributed by
Sasha
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Friday, 22nd June 2012 @ 07:48:40 AM in AEST
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I was picking diamonds from the heavens
When my hair got tangled with the stars in the breeze
Fireflies reached up in glee too, their soft glow dancing
Singing our mirth awash with moon-paint, I smiled
Then the night tugged gently, pulling away the sky
For the dawn to stroll in, with her show-stopper colors
The diamonds in my hands were spilling their brilliance
Reaching down to earth, to jewel my silent hopes
I learned to fly with the winds on rapture
Their swoosh, music to my hopes on wish-pegs
They warm themselves in the summer-sun promises
Waiting to burst alive on my future rainbows
Some nomads we pick treasures from the future
The skies and nature our only witness
We walk with them prized in our hunting bags
Carrying hope in its precious revered status...
Copyright ©
Sasha
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2012-06-22 07:48:40]
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Re: Picking Diamonds
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by nikki080794 on
Friday, 22nd June 2012 @ 03:44:37 PM AEST
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I thought that it was enchanting and very well written. Made me feel like I was in a very expensive dream! ;)
Very good I couldn't stop reading and I hope you write more because you are very talented :)
Keep up the good work
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Re: Picking Diamonds
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by shanat on
Friday, 22nd June 2012 @ 08:16:07 PM AEST
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very well written you had me in from the begining, love anything about the heavens:)
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Re: Picking Diamonds
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by soulsongs on
Saturday, 23rd June 2012 @ 08:19:56 AM AEST
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| Very nice. Love your lofty imagination and whimsical insight! Made me smile :) |
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Re: Picking Diamonds
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by thehotshotpoet on
Sunday, 24th June 2012 @ 07:50:56 AM AEST
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nice work , now if you get a spare minute while you are up there picking diamonds would you pick a couple for me please?I'm broke.
thanks for sharing
the hot shot poet |
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Re: Picking Diamonds
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by Ensis718 on
Tuesday, 26th June 2012 @ 10:10:56 PM AEST
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| Can I pick the diamonds with you? They're so pretty! |
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