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A old man's tear
Contributed by
tntdion
on
Thursday, 21st June 2012 @ 08:52:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I’m home
All alone
Not a sound in the house
Not even a mouse
As the fire roars
I sit there with my thoughts
There is a knock at the door
I go see who it is
As I get near
Gun goes off
Then door is broken down
And I’m on the ground
Bleeding now
Guys with mask storm in
The bleeding gets bad
They're stealing stuff that I've lived with for years
And all I can do is die
I start to cry
Not because I am about to die
Or my stuff is gone forever more
It’s because people can be so poor
That they had to knock at a old man’s door
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tntdion
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2012-06-21 20:52:47]
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Re: A old man's tear
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Friday, 22nd June 2012 @ 03:54:33 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
It is sad but good writing.
I sure hope things are better now.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: A old man's tear
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by me_me on
Thursday, 28th June 2012 @ 01:12:35 PM AEST
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very touching and sad.
hope ur well. |
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