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Forever Friend
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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The first tear already fell,
Much is between us, too much to tell,
I can't express emotions in cohesive thought,
But from this I learned alot.
I learned sometimes you need to kiss the rain,
Put your fears away, ignore the pain.
Even if it all falls apart,
Living life is the real art.
Sometimes you need to jump on in,
Heart and soul, love's not a sin.
And when your trampled on the ground,
This world's a funny thing, time keeps spinning 'round.
The greatest gift you can ever give,
Is love; and a shared life to live.
And though it didn't work for you and I,
I can smile through the tears I cry.
Know now that I'm letting you go,
And even though I'm terrified to show;
My heart is breaking itself in two,
And the bigger half I give to you.
Please keep it as a symbol of myself,
I know it hurts, my little Nazgul elf,
The relationship has grown to its end,
But you'll always be, my forever friend.
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yellow_sundragon
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Re: Forever Friend
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by Sk8er909 on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 08:27:04 PM AEST
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| Very good write i could sorta realate to this |
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Re: Forever Friend
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by Metalmouth666 on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 08:56:11 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful, I hate to say goodbye to a loved one, I hope that it's the right thing you needed to do. |
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Re: Forever Friend
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by me on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 09:27:10 PM AEST
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| very nice... it's sad when u realize the time has come... and still u keep the person in your heart... |
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Re: Forever Friend
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 10:50:39 AM AEST
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| someone i love recently said goodbye and its hard, this poem is lovely, hugs nessa |
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Re: Forever Friend
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by stargazer on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 06:12:51 PM AEST
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This was beautiful. Recently my best friend and I... we said farewell. And it is extremely hard because I have fallen in love with him. But sometimes you just need to hold your head up high and smile.... even if it kills you.
Very nice write.
Amy |
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Re: Forever Friend
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 12:48:44 AM AEST
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| Wonderful write .. can relate to this very well ... love how you ended it ... Jan |
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Re: Forever Friend
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by Saira on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 08:39:32 PM AEST
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| Its a very beautiful write that touches the heart. The way u poured out ur emotions is simply great. |
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Re: Forever Friend
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 02:39:17 AM AEST
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At last a believable "love" story from a real person. I've been through this situation myself and taken the hard decision.
I get so fed up with these sloppy sentimental
compositions. "Blood and soul tear jerkers"
beautifully composed, expertly written, deliberately unreal and very popular.
I'd rather have yours any day. Equally well written and vey real.
The poem that refers to my parallel situation is called "The way we were" if you would like to see how things turned out for me. |
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Re: Forever Friend
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 07:23:26 PM AEST
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Oh wow... I never read this one. Must've missed it when it was on the home page. It's so beautiful! I love the third and fourth stanzas! I also learned in recent months that sometimes you just have to jump on in. That's when beautiful things happen! Even if it doesn't work out, you know you loved with all your heart. Like that poem I wrote... Everything That Starts With A Smile blah blah blah. Anyways I love this poem! Cheer up, sweetie!
Blessed Be,
~ Dee |
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Re: Forever Friend
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 10:01:56 AM AEST
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| aah...so beautiful but so sad at the same time...wonderful write... |
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Re: Forever Friend
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 02:26:20 AM AEST
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Awww hun! *hugs!*
Well i can sort of relate, i just wish i had been the one to say goodbye...then it might not hurt so much...
Beautiful! very brilliantly written!
Lots of Love 'n' Hugs
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Re: Forever Friend
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by SweetRhythm on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:17:30 AM AEST
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Auh that was just lovely, very touching to the heart. It's not always easy to acknowlege the sad truth of reality but you have faced it head on & took all the good with you, fare play to you. That was one brilliant adorable moving write.
Corinna |
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