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i stand
Contributed by
nightrider
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Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i stand
alone and apart
unknown and lost
i fall
hard and fast
weak and confused
i lay
dazed and hurt
tired and discouraged
i die
alone and lost
weak and confused
hurt and tired
i die, but i dont have to
fight to stand anymore
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nightrider
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2003-05-09 17:35:00]
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Re: i stand
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 06:08:06 PM AEST
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Nightrider, this was really good.... I'm glad your friend persuaded you to post it....
The imagery is good..
Jenni |
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Re: i stand
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by MX on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 05:10:20 PM AEST
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hello nightrider(dont think u want me to use ur real name..?) well i thought that poem was really good...pure emotion. hey...d...i mean...'nightrider' im always here for you...just wanted you to know...
-Em (MX) |
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Re: i stand
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by frozensuicide on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 07:20:23 PM AEST
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| this is goooood! i like it. |
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