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Will You Remember?
Contributed by
Action567
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Sunday, 10th June 2012 @ 07:57:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I am no one special
Nor do I claim to be
But I wonder sometimes
Will people remember me?
People see me everyday
But will they notice if I am not there
Will they ever think of me
Will they even care?
I have friends
And some very special to me
But after a while even to them
Will my memory cease to be?
Time has a way
Of helping people deal
When they lose someone
And the pain that they feel.
When I am gone
And no longer on this earth
I want to leave behind
Something of worth.
Something that will stand out
That people will see
And they will smile
And maybe think of me.
Some people make a difference
And that is what I want to do
I want to make the world a better place
For each and everyone of you.
I want to do something
So people will not forget
I was once here
And maybe someone that they had met.
Maybe one day
Before I go
There will be something I can do
And then people will know.
That yes I was here
But from this earth I did depart
My only hope is that a part of me
Will forever remain in their hearts.
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Re: Will You Remember?
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by snc54 on
Sunday, 10th June 2012 @ 02:58:23 PM AEST
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| very thoughtful. i love this rhyme scheme. i use it often as well |
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Re: Will You Remember?
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by Archie on
Sunday, 10th June 2012 @ 04:03:04 PM AEST
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| I hope this helps you have a better day. Writing helps as does reading. The remembrance you seek comes from helping others. No fan fare will bring us peace only the realizations we put into action. |
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Re: Will You Remember?
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by Waynster on
Sunday, 10th June 2012 @ 04:22:50 PM AEST
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Hello,
WoW, I really enjoyed reading this poem you wrote. I use the same writing technique with all of my poems. Your poem has so much meaning and understanding. I think you should write more often! If you look at my poems, you will see we write quite the same. Thanks for sharing this poem and please write more.
Wayne |
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