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lifes tears
Contributed by
jordancharl
on
Saturday, 9th June 2012 @ 01:54:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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most of lifes fears
are expressed with warm tears.
so when you are down,
act like a clown.
its such a good way to banish a frown.
throw a big party
invite everyone round,
drink and be merry
have good music for sound.
remember life is too short
for miserable thought.
dont hide in the corner
sipping a port.
dance on the tables,
swing from the chandeliers,
have a good time
forget all your tears.
drink lifes champagne
again and again,
and happy and fun
you will remain.
Copyright ©
jordancharl
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2012-06-09 13:54:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: lifes tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by Waynster on
Saturday, 9th June 2012 @ 06:45:21 PM AEST (User
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Hi there, awesome poem, but stanzas 4 and 6 threw me off. You changed your rhyming scheme. All in all, you did a great job, because what you say makes sense and has meaning behind it too.
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