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The Pier
Contributed by
sebgreen
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Friday, 8th June 2012 @ 06:38:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I stood at the pier tonight
Whilst orange and white
Drunken lights straggled and danced
Across the flowing black silence deep.
The wind brought rain and the tinge
Of seaside smell, bittersweet.
Still the tide ebbs.
And the time we spent
And the memories I rent
Seemed but a handful of sand
Slipping through clenched fingers,
Unstoppable,
Returned to the vastness, infiniteness,
Swallowed by the sea.
Copyright ©
sebgreen
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2012-06-08 18:38:30]
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Re: The Pier
(User Rating: 1 )
by Maygee on
Friday, 8th June 2012 @ 09:31:16 PM AEST
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| Nice flow to it, a lovely poem, very nice read :) |
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Re: The Pier
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th June 2012 @ 12:13:24 AM AEST
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| Really nice. :) |
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